Children’s Poems based on Frank Asch’s ‘Sunflakes’

We read Frank Asch’s poem Sunflakes

We talked about images that the poem put into our minds.

Then we wrote our own poems.

 

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‘Starflakes’ by Shauna

If stars fell like snowflakes,

bright, shining and beautiful,

we could build a starman.

We could have a star fight.

We could watch the starflakes

dancing in the air.

We could have a star party

and we wouldn’t have a care.

 

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‘Fireworks’ by Max

If fireworks fell like snowflakes

multicoloured and sparkling,

we could build a firework man!

We could have a firework fight!

We would watch the fireflakes

flickering in the dark.

We could have a firework display

and watch it in the park.

 

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‘Magic’ by Alice

If magic fell like snowflakes,

sparkly and so pretty,

we could build a magic man,

we could have a magic fight.

We could watch the sparkle flakes

drifting in the blue.

We could have three wishes,

two for me

and one for you!

 

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