It was a dark and stormy night.
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I was out.
The last of the Autumn leaves were falling.
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The air was heavy.
Dark eyes were watching.
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We walked along.
Razor sharp brambles
snagging on our clothes.
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Vicious thorns too.
Making our way
to an old ramshackled cabin,
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we opened the squeaky door,
we found a dying fire.
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There were rotten walls and broken glass.
I got a text.
It said,
‘Where are you?’
It was my Mum,
‘I have to go home’, I explained.
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I was glad to go home.
Great story. Great use of adjectives. Great descriptions. Where did you come up with all these good ideas?
Jake, that was a great description in your story .