A secret hides in the forest.
This is the secret in the forest,
the secret is a jewel
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that can made the world end.
Only a very brave lady
shall find the jewel
and break the spell…
Young Alice The Brave.
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The Queen of the Forest
and the young Alice
go through horrible storms
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to get to where the jewel is.
This is in the Winter of 1912.
The Queen and I travelled
through thick forest.
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They meet two birds.
One says it is safe.
The other says it is not safe.
I am not trying to be horrible
This is my reply
“I do think
I would be
angry
with myself
if I didn’t try.
There it is..
the jewel
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I took it.
I had succeeded by myself
The world was safe.
I really liked your story Alice, it had a great plot and ending. I think you did a great job by adding the part ‘Only a very brave lady shall find the jewel and break the spell’ It reminded me of Snow white. Overall I think your story was great and the wording was amazing
Dijana, from Canada
Thank you Dijana. I was delighted to read your comment. Thank for all those lovely compliments. I do a lot of reading, so that may help with my writing. Canada is quite far away, so I am proud of myself that you commented all the way from Canada. You made my day !