My dragon lives in this castle.
You can see his eyes.
His name is Tricky.
He makes the castle beautiful,
so people will want to visit.
Then he will gobble them up.
Tricky makes it rain.
He makes storms
with thunder and lightening.
Then people come in
to the castle for shelter
and then he gobbles them up.
Fabulous writing Jack. What a clever dragon Tricky is. You’ve got some WOW words in there: gobbled, shelter and beautiful. They made your story even more interesting. Well done!
Thank you very much Mrs.Smith. Jack will be excited and delighted to see a comment all the way from New Zealand. I will show it to him on Monday morning, bright and early 🙂
Dear Mrs. Smith,
Jack said ‘Thank you’.