A secret hides in the forest.
Behind the trees there is …
a huge green door,
Photo Credit: david pham via Compfight
covered in ivy and roses.
If you go through the door,
you will be in a
completely
different
world.
It never rains there,
but there is the perfect amount of water.
It is very warm there,
but not too warm.
Photo Credit: Nomad Within (Pete DeMarco) via Compfight
And the animals that live there are friendly.
There is lots of fresh, juicy fruit
and things to eat there.
Photo Credit: Sergio Tudela Romero via Compfight
My favourite part is the places to play
and the beaches and rivers to play in.
If you are hot,
just go under a tree for shade.
Photo Credit: Richard Lowkes via Compfight
But you know
a secret
hides in the forest
behind the trees.
I think you did a great job Niamh. I liked that you told us what your favorite part was. Your story was mysterious and left me asking question’s like ‘what happens next’.
I really liked the part ‘A secret hides in the forest. Behind the trees there is … a huge green door, covered in ivy and roses. If you go through the door, you will be in a completely different world. ‘ because I thought it added an edge to the story and made me want to read more. Good job
Dijana, from Canada
Thank you Dijana for the kind comment and all the positive things you said about my story. I got the idea from when I was on my holidays in Spain, because the place was like the scene I describe in my story.In my dreams, I would like to find a magic door like that. Thanks again, Niamh
Great story Niamh. I thought it was a very different story in a good way .
What a lovely comment Shauna 🙂